Sunday, December 8, 2013

Making the most of our writing time

By Joy Harrison

The last two chapters helped fill in all of the gaps that I had been wondering about while reading the beginning of the work. They brought everything together and made me feel more comfortable with the structure and purpose of writing conferences. I especially enjoyed the chapter on mini-lessons, because sometimes this is the hardest part of teaching writing -- making sure that the mini-lessons are indeed mini, and that they are contextualized and intentional so that students can relate to them and grow because of them. Sometimes I feel like the planning of mini-lessons is a mystery because I'm never quite sure what I should be doing/saying so that I can really teach to my students' intentions. Chapter 5 demystified the structure and components of effective mini-lessons, so I feel more comfortable leading them during Writer's Workshop.

I love the advice that Anderson gives to start off our mini-lesson with noticing: "In the first part of the mini-lesson, we let students know what we've noticed about them as writers, and what we're going to teach them to help them be better writers" (144). I have done this without even thinking about it but I think that I need to be more intentional about it. I also have to make sure that I'm not just saying "we're working on editing because I realized that no one truly knows what editing is in this classroom." Not that I've said exactly that to my students, but sometimes my noticing is framed as somewhat negative. Now of course I need to be responsive to my students' needs but the noticing part of my mini-lesson should not be discouraging.

I rarely plan the "have-a-go" (p. 147) part of the conference and I think this is what is missing in my mini-lessons. I remember writing in one of my daily connections about feeling frustrated that my students are not actually doing any of the things that I have been teaching them in my mini-lessons. I have struggled empowering my students to practice and implement the skills that I teach during my writing mini-lessons. Anderson gives some very practical and helpful solutions to this problem -- the "have-a-go" and the link to the students' independent writing. These are two important steps that I am missing and without them, my mini-lessons will be useless.

Chapter 6 helped me revisit the structure of my mini-lessons. When I first started doing writing conferences, I had students come to my small table, and I recorded conferences notes in my binder. I thought it was going fairly well, especially because I felt as though my note-taking strategy was helping me build upon the previous time that I had worked with that child, but after reading Anderson's ideas about positionality and the importance of coming to the writer instead of the writer coming to me, everything changed. One of the downfalls of having students come to me was that I was majorly interrupting their writing, the conferences were going too long, and I wasn't able to see enough students during my writing time. A few weeks ago, I started holding conferences around the room. I bought a conferring chair at Ikea (I'm serious -- it's a little stool that's very portable) so that I can walk around the room and sit down next to a child to get on their level. I have been able to meet with 6-10 people in one Writer's Workshop, which is so much better than before when I was only able to see 3-4 students a day. My students and I are still getting used to this new structure, so I am excited about getting to see more of my writers each day which will hopefully lead to their growth. One of my other goals is for my students to have peer conferences, but we're not there yet.

The last chapter helped remind me of the things that I can do to make sure that my writers are making the most of their writing time. I have always wanted my students to get into a "writing zone" where they are not distracted and they can work independently without me giving them a reminder every 5 minutes. I have recently started playing classical music in our Writer's Workshop -- it helps me focus (hopefully it helps the students too -- most of my students have said that they like it) and it also helps keep the tone very calm and serene. I like the idea in Chapter 7 about there being "no talking, no walking time" (p. 173)  for the first few minutes of independent writing. I think that starting off the independent writing time with the right tone is so important. When students get up to go the bathroom or sharpen their pencil in those first few minutes, it definitely affects the tone and flow of the writing time. I want my students to understand that independent writing time is not about just staring at your Writer's Notebook and waiting for Ms. Harrison to confer with me -- I want my students to take responsibility for their writing and be motivated to write independently. In this chapter I also enjoyed the reminders that students need to be "invested" in their writing if they are expected to continually and independently write during Writer's Workshop (p. 178). I want my students to be publishing more frequently (but not too frequently) so that they have a sense of purpose for their writing. Sharing and celebrating is an invaluable part of Writer's Workshop -- without this, students will start to dislike writing and will not grow as writers.

I'm so glad that we read this book together. It was so helpful and practical. Thank you all for challenging me as a writing teacher! My writing instruction has improved so much from last year.

8 comments:

  1. Joy I am so inspired as you reflect on the impact this book is having on your writing instruction. It is wonderful to watch others as they improve and strengthen their practice. I took away some of the same things while reading the last few chapters of this book. Specifically, how important is to make that connection to why we are focusing on a particular skill or strategy during the first part of a mini-lesson. It is so important for us to make that connection. I also needed to be reminded of the importance of students being invested in their work and taking responsibility for their writing. I use a little motivational song to encourage my students to stay on task during writing workshop. ;)

    Tenagne

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    1. Thanks for your kind words! What song do you use? I'm always looking for ways to make Writer's Workshop more exciting and motivational!

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  2. I totally agree with what you were saying about the "have-a-go." It is frustrating when what you are doing in your mini-lessons isn't translating to what they are working on in writer's workshop. I think that this will help! Anderson also talked about using a post-it note as a reminder after a writing conference to students who really needed to be using that strategy. That makes your mini-lessons even more pointed at the students who are lacking that specific skill. It is also a great way for you to keep track of how they are progressing on those things.

    Keep sharing and celebrating your writers. It is so powerful!!

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    1. Yes, I forgot to mention that I loved the post-it note idea! Thanks for the reminder :)

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  3. I'm glad we read this book together as well! Just a little update... I did revise my writer's block to include some of the strategies you suggested during the content retreate. Students created their list of what they heart, what they are experts in and what they love. This has helped a little with their writer's block to help them refer back to when they get writers block.

    I realize that I also need to do a better job of creating a writing zone and limit the talking and distraction during the minutes of independent writing, I believe this will create a better writing environment for my students to become more productive.

    I'm sure we will continue to share our progress with each other as we revamp our writer's workshops in our classes :)

    -Ashley

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    1. Thanks for the update, Ashley! I'm glad that those strategies have been helping. I actually had to do a review mini-lesson about making sure that students are going back to their heart map and authority list to give them ideas for writing. They are currently working on informational pieces based off of something on their Authority List.

      I think that it's so important to establish a serious tone in Writer's Workshop where 100% of the class is expected to write, the whole time. Of course their pencil might not be to the page throughout the whole time, but I make sure to keep my expectations high that students are working until I say stop. They don't stop when they think they're done. I'm constantly trying to enforce the cyclical nature of writing, and writing a draft, for example, is not just something to check off a list. Teaching all of this is difficult, but two things that I have experienced that have helped my kids "get in the zone" have been playing soft, classical music in the background (their voices cannot be louder than the music), and having them be silent for the first 5-10 minutes of independent writing time (no peer editing or peer conferences). This might help you set a serious tone for writing time.

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  4. Joy,

    I, too, really felt like Anderson filled in lots of gaps for us in these last few chapters.

    I appreciate your post because you touch on several of the things I also thought about while reading, but did not include in my own post. Like, the noticing part of the lesson-- I would also like to be more intentional about this. For me, having a space i my notes specifically for jotting down things I've noticed for that part of my next lesson will be helpful.

    And I also tend to skip over the have-a-go portion of my conferences :(. I'm usually obsessing over time, and unfortunately, this part is always the first to get cut. This month I'm really going to work on honoring 5 minute conferences a bit more strictly--at least until I get comfortable with it. If I'm not worrying about time, and instead pacing myself with the understanding that 5-6 minutes is OKAY, I think I can be a bit more intentional about including the have-a-go. It sounds pretty basic, but I think I also need to use a timer for a while, too.

    Thanks for writing!

    -allaisia

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